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    Simply, scandalously

    stars walking...
    members of action,
    merely a distraction
    of muscled contraction
    and shocking abstractions.

    Brazen flesh flashes...
    pressing fluid oscillations,
    slow sensual undulations,
    added rhythmic alternations,
    rippled flowing fluctuations.

    Whispered glances reveal...
    blatant eyes masterbating
    bared thighs, consternating
    lean lines, exasperating
    heights of recreating.

    A corporeal constellation...
    winking frivolously,
    teases tumbled numerously,
    weathering capriciously,
    simply, scandalously

    yours...for your affection,
    a loving reaction,
    caring predilection,
    for when coarse clouds permeate
    they sing dereliction.
    Last edited by Echoes; 11-10-2006 at 12:12 PM. Reason: i can't get the proper format of the poem in here
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    each subsequent line of each verse can be read as a separate poem. The way I have it originally formatted allows this, but I do not know how to format it this way here. As example...the first line in each stanza reads;

    stars walking...
    Brazen flesh flashes...
    Whispered glances reveal...
    A corporeal constellation...
    yours...for your affection,

    the second line in each stanza reads;

    members of action,
    pressing fluid oscillations,
    blatant eyes masterbating
    winking frivolously,
    a loving reaction,
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    "each subsequent line of each verse can be read as a separate poem. "

    Fascinating... quite interesting indeed.

    You are a very talented poet.
    Mit diesem Herz hab ich die Macht
    die Augenlider zu erpressen
    ich singe bis der Tag erwacht
    ein heller Schein am Firmament
    Mein Herz brennt

    - Rammstein

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    echoes, so good to see you posting, and that is soooo clever - I need time to read/think on it to really be able to appreciate it. Once again, amazed by your creative abilities.

    Lips slip
    Fingers linger
    Heart starts



    Well, that was quick

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    echoes, you continue to astound and delight me. How totally unequalled in anything I have seen yet. You surely are above and beyond me in your creativity and your ability.
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...
    Robert A. Heinlein, Friday

    To my darling Lady. It is your happiness that I seek more than anything else. To see you happy is reward enough. I Love you.

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    thank you Timberwolf, moptop and TDS...hey, did you know I wanted to be a poet when I grew up?
    Seriously, is it not all about passion, love, imagination and freedom to strive to do the best you can in what you do and are?
    To each who brings a smile, a touch, an embrace in some form to at least one person...
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