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  1. 09-13-2007 #1
    Rhabbi
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    Maelstrom

    Something I threw together after looking at iron poet. thrall encouraged me to post it here. Please be kind.



    A cascade of emotion
    A torrent of desire
    Bringing life to desolation
    And a raging fire

    Does life have to be pain
    Can it not be always joy
    A summer storm of rain
    And some time with a toy

    Knowing you brings rivers
    And the maelstrom of whitewater
    My life is full of shivers
    And pleasure ever after
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  2. 09-13-2007 #2
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    See, I knew that you had it in you after all.........lol

    Its beautiful........
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    Wow, that's very good. I love the imagery.
    The end comes when we no longer talk with ourselves. It is the end of genuine thinking and the beginning of the final loneliness. The remarkable thing is that the cessation of the inner dialogue marks also the end of our concern with the world around us. It is as if we noted the world and think about it only when we have to report it to ourselves.
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  4. 09-14-2007 #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by thrall View Post
    See, I knew that you had it in you after all.........lol

    Its beautiful........
    Thank you thrall, that means a lot.

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    Wow, that's very good. I love the imagery.
    Nice of you to say so twitch. Thank you.
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    WoW Rhabbi awesome poem...

    Twitch was right i love the imagery as well

    hugs
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    Quote Originally Posted by snowflake View Post
    WoW Rhabbi awesome poem...

    Twitch was right i love the imagery as well

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    Thank you snow, nice to know I can write poems also.
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  7. 02-13-2008 #7
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    you can indeed write poems mate!
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