Story codes and copyright question

[Saridu]

Hi Venom,

Thanks for the advice, I will list all codes for the series up front but keep my introduction for each chapter intact which includes codes for that chapter.

Well it's not serious, my understanding is this is reserved for actual BDSM practices and realistic situations - I write fantasy ;-) and after reading some of the stories in the archive, it's not heavy so maybe I'll go with light, the nastiest I write is a public flogging with no blood and talk of foot whipping, for this site that's most probably classified at "light"

As I said above I'm keeping each chapter introduction and that mentions anything nasty going on to warn potential readers.

The last one is a hard one, your example mentions shit but only in passing, no description given, mine I don't describe the actual act but do comment on it, (See below)

I fear that listing scat will have two affects, firstly it would chase the lighter reader away (or anybody who doesn't like scat) because they would expect to read scat on every other page and secondly it would only tease the heavier reader who wants to read that and would be disappointed with the very light scene described.

May I ask one more favour? I'm going to upload on Friday night but before that if you have time, here is the scene in question if you could provide your feedback, thanks!

Miringko returned with two large silver bowls.

“Remove their plugs.”.

Kailya felt the woman push her forward so she was on all fours before the slave trainer, she gasped as the large dildo that was lodged up her ass was swiftly removed.

“Miringko, you should see her face, priceless.” Gauri mocked the Galadrian.

Kailya winced as her abused ass slowly closed, then another sensation returned to her, she hadn’t eaten much yesterday but Khalim’s last deposit of cum was now pooling at her asshole, she really needed the toilet.

“I need the toilet.”.

Nahid and the other two slaves laughed loudly.

“Oh you can do better than that slave, come on beg for it.”.

“Please I need the toilet.”.

Nahid motioned and Kailya winced as Miringko flicked the leather strips across her wide ass.

“The correct term is, please mistress master’s worthless slave begs to drop her shit.”.

Kailya glared at her,

“Please mistress master’s worthless slave begs to drop her shit.”, she angrily mouthed the demeaning words.

Nahid laughed again and drank some fruit juice.

“Very well slave, since you asked so nicely, squat over the bowel.”.

Kailya’s eyes widened with shock, she couldn’t be serious.

“I, please allow me to use the toilet.”.

The four pleasure slaves and their mistress burst into laughter.

“You are truly funny slave, I haven’t seen such arrogance in a long time, training you is going to be most entertaining.” Nahid pulled her slave chain, Kailya winced and desperately tightened her asshole. The black woman’s cat eyes bored into the matriarch, “Only the faithful of Kalashite, free woman use toilets, slaves squat like the filthy animals they are. Now animal drop your shit or I will cane your asshole until you do.”, Kailya gulped, the fierce woman was not joking, she closed her eyes in shame and squatted over the bowel.

“Very good, pheew smell that girls.”.

“The cow stinks! Make her use the common bowel by the corral.” Gauri smirked nastily.”

“Hmm, perhaps if she doesn’t behave herself.”

“Is that master’s cum? Ungrateful whore.” Gauri snarled jealously rasing her whip.

“Gauri control yourself, Ashara was telling me how loudly the bitch wailed when he fucked her ass, he will tire of her soon.”.

“Cow doesn’t like it up the ass?” the Dravithian smirked, she ran a hand down to her tight ass and tapped it playfully, “Master loves fucking his bitches up the ass, he’s going to throw this white cow onto the street before the end of the month.” The two older slaves laughed together.

“Now your turn slave six and please resist, that tight ass is begging for a good caning.” Chandra glared at the women and for the fiftieth time struggled against the well constructed steel chains.

“Just do it Chandra.” Kailya eyed the trainer down.

“Silence! Her name is slave six, if you talk to her again without my permission I will discipline you.” Nahid snapped.

The trainer held Kailya gaze as the two older slaves slapped Chandra’s ass laughingly before pushing the bowel beneath her. Chandra swore by Nustress she would make Farouk pay for this.

“Very good slave, I will make fucktoys out of you yet. Now enough, it is time for their dinner, bring the bowels.” Nahid commanded.

[lucy]

I liked it too and Venom has done a terrific job with his critique. I too think that in this case it isn't scat play. I've written such stuff too and never used the 'scat-tag'.

Well it's not serious, my understanding is this is reserved for actual BDSM practices and realistic situations - I write fantasy ;-)

Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too

[John Tagliaferro]

I liked it too and Venom has done a terrific job with his critique. I too think that in this case it isn't scat play. I've written such stuff too and never used the 'scat-tag'.
Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too

Trust me. When my stories get past basic restraints and erotic bondage, it is all fiction vs. reality.

[Saridu]

Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too

Touche, what I meant was that I write in a fantasy setting (magic, wizards, witches etc) so my writing cannot be considered set in a realistic situation. Even my actual sex scenes require a little suspension of belief (Part A rarely fits as easily in Slot B as I describe and few woman, I'm sure could enjoy anal sex as much as my protagonists :P )

Thanks Venom for the critique, I'm an amateur so I usually write first pass and I'm too much in a rush to write the next scene (My muse is one demanding mistress) to consider my grammar. Yes I now notice how I tend to double full stop after speech in sentences, something I will have to look out for ;-)

So serious it is without scat. Thank you once again for the feedback, I will hopefully start posting tonight.