Razor's Fourth Level Three Assignment

[Razor7826]

Ain't ya glad I am on your side?

Yes, I am. I think I've gotten noticably better in the three months since this was written. I haven't read many (or any) pulp-PI stories, so most of these comparisons or references are lost on me.

[H Dean]

Yes, I am. I think I've gotten noticably better in the three months since this was written. I haven't read many (or any) pulp-PI stories, so most of these comparisons or references are lost on me.

You have gotten substancially better, in fact. I can recall looking at your older stuff and thinking you were on the edge - waiting for you to cross that line. I was glad to see you cross it. Frankly, I think you are a short time away from writing something you can be really proud of.