Advice needed

[icey]

lol ok ignore me ...im kind of sad like that (i wont point out the bad spelling H Dean lol) but you can turn force into a lot of things and it can be original and still have a real twist to it all you need is a bit of imagination, just remember 9 times out of 10 that while a lot of people like to see storys end in love when it comes to 'porn' they dont give a damn about that stuff! perhaps as the cop climbs out the car she stumbles slips and drops her gun the 'wild' gangster grasps it thrusts her against the engine......ok i know typical boring stuff but im not a writer! though put that same situation in the desert just a few trees around ...trees, branches,twigs,dust,thirst, stones,dead cars,engines etc

[H Dean]

lol ok ignore me ...im kind of sad like that (i wont point out the bad spelling H Dean lol) but you can turn force into a lot of things and it can be original and still have a real twist to it all you need is a bit of imagination, just remember 9 times out of 10 that while a lot of people like to see storys end in love when it comes to 'porn' they dont give a damn about that stuff! perhaps as the cop climbs out the car she stumbles slips and drops her gun the 'wild' gangster grasps it thrusts her against the engine......ok i know typical boring stuff but im not a writer! though put that same situation in the desert just a few trees around ...trees, branches,twigs,dust,thirst, stones,dead cars,engines etc

That wasn't bad spelling, that was messed up fingers getting ahead of themelves. Now, Icey, for your insolence, I shall be forced to chastise you!

So, PTHTHTHTHTHTHTHTHT!