I'm not sure if this line was intended to have a double meaning

"Your body is still, cold, my eyes are glued"

The first means you cannot look away, which I'm sure you meant. But when I read that, my first thought was, "Wait, is she dead too?" Because I believe sometimes the eyes of the deceased are glued shut. And then I corrected that based on the context, but I thought that it was interesting...it was like a hint that part of you had died too while gazing on him.

Whether you thought of that when you wrote it doesn't really matter as much as the fact that it's there. It's such a sad poem because it's a loss, but that one part shows an eternal connection, which in my opinion, created a beautifully melancholy paradox.