Aussie, I notice that the students find more fun in critiquing your stories than mine. I guess you have more screw ups than I.
Man, I like being mean!
Nay, H Dean, it's not that your story isn't tempting to edit. It's that your reputation precedes you, and not many of us are interested in painting a target on our backs for your delicate criticisms. lol
Diving for cover, now...
Lady C
"Beauty is only skin deep, but ugly goes clear to the bone."