I'm at a bit of a loss what I need to work on for Project Hope. I tackled a revision a few weeks ago, but none of the changes I made felt very significant. I'll try to look it over the next few days and see if I can revise it a bit more.

As for this Bad Ending, I'm not particularly interested in expanding it into something more. This was my least favorite of the Bad Ends before, and even with the revisions it probably still is. If I were to expand it further, the bulk of the transformation would have to be in the middle sex scene, which would bore me to tears.

Much like I've mentioned before, I'd much prefer to be given new prompts and see what I can come up with. I understand that revision is an excruciatingly important part of the writing process, but I find it far more interesting to write entirely new stories using the feedback from old ones.