Hi Ladychipmunk,

Just wanted you to know that I've seen this and will be "marking it up" with suggestions in a few days.

Most of them are editing nits. I'd like to see you use more commas and periods. :-)

Some of your descriptions were so well done, they took my breath away. They made me pant, too!

Meanwhile, perhaps others can jump in and lend their comments.

Thanks for getting me all hot and bothered,

Ruby