Razor's Third Level Three Assignment. TERRIFYING

[Razor7826]

All 'word' counts that I've ever had to deal with before were counted via characters, with one word being every 5 keystokes (the average word is four letters and a space, supposedly). Do they count genuine words for the contest?


Edit: Finished another version, the main changes being a switch to past tense, a line separating the two eras, and a few changes in wording. It is okay to switch tenses between sections, right? (i.e. when she is reflecting on her current life at the end of the story). What about the sentence fragments when she is describing her senses?









Fugue State (V 2.1)
By Razor7826

The world around me shattered and whirled back into focus. Everything was new, and my senses readjusted. Salt on my tongue. Sweat in my nose. Blur in my eyes. Slapping in my ears. I felt full. A wonderful warmth touched my soul like never before.

I realized my predicament. A cock in my mouth. Another in my pussy. I was a dirty piece of meat being bounced around for pleasure. I started to scream, and the filth in my mouth began to rumble and erupt. The cock blasted warm cum over my face as I fell sideways onto the bed.

A bearded man leaned down and shook me with terror in his eyes. "Rachel! Rachel, what's wrong?"

The Asian woman from behind screamed in panic and dropped her pink dildo. "Rayche, oh my god, are you okay?" She started to cry, and they both hugged me like a perfect little family. I recognized neither of them.

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They call it a fugue state. Drop your life without realizing and start anew, a completely new person in the same living shell.

My name is not Rachel. It's Reverend Rebecca Kent. For the rest of my life, I must hide from my parish the disgusting sins I committed as that other woman, maintaining the facade of purity that defines church life.

I love my husband and daughters, but as each day passes, I long more and more for the violent, filthy, and sinful acts which filled life with Mike and Michelle Lee.