Quote Originally Posted by submissivewife
Well, lets think...What gets any young female teenager? He treats her kindly, he showers her with gifts, he shows lots of attention. He plays her emotions against her so she is reliant on him. Of course it's not that love will be the issue with him. He just wants to fuck a virgin. She is very vulnerable right now and any show of "special" attention will get her more entrapted to his charm and sway her.

Just a thought if you were having writer block. I had lots of that when I wrote Sir's Visit....That story was actually a timed assignment by my Sir. He gave me 42 hours to do it. Most of it was written during the last three hours. Once you get your ideas flowing you will do great...as usual.

subwife
Great points Subwife!

I have some ideas now to find the time to write.

I've been a little under the weather and it's the busy, busy holidays. I hope to write again soon.

Fury

Quote Originally Posted by strapmeup
That was great...I really enjoyed reading it...thanks!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Strapmeup and thanks for letting me know that you did!

Fury

Quote Originally Posted by Mad Lews
Such a lovely story with exquisit detail and lovely emotions. If people start suspecting your a romantic at heart you might get type cast into writing BDSM Romance Novels Now there's a fate worse than being in one, or not.

Please continue
Mad Lews
I will when I get the chance and thank you Mad Lews!

I am a romantic at heart and a sentimentalist and all kinds of things.

I don't mind saying so.

I am also a realist and more

Those two things sometimes butt against one another.

Fury