Quote Originally Posted by slave ruthie
i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice
Nik the Writ Deejay is playing Sunshine of Your Love by Cream in the background....

Personally Ruthie, I give you a lot of credit for sticking with the chapter until you were satisfied with the result. Will you give us a heads up when you submit it for posting? I'll make time for it on my dance card.


And Mistress Ranai, I have another thing to thank you for. I'm sure it will not be the last time, either.

Nikita