i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice

Mistress Ranai has re-crafted Rosario into such a formidable, credible Domme that i would readily kneel before Her, if i wasn't already owned in real life LOL!

i wanted to record my gratitude, in particular to Mistress Ranai, and to all the O/other people who have taken the trouble to review and contact me with ideas and advice. Y/you have no idea how valuable this help can be to a novice writer!

please keep telling the A/authors on this site what Y/you like and dislike, what works and what needs to be changed. it's not about praise (although that's very nice to receive) but about learning and sharing O/our love of BDSM