lol - how could i forget about it? actually Phil takes little to do with the story these days apart from being terribly practical and saying things like "she must be double-jointed to do that" or "well, by the time they finished they'd be crippled" and other such comments...Originally Posted by pejanon
...i haveto confess i got seriously stuck and couldn't see how the storyline might work. feedback (both good and bad) and suggestions have really made the difference. i also got into the trap of re-writing and re-re-re-re-re-writing until i couldn't see the story properly. i was told by another Author here to "let it go" and i did...and the sky didn't fall down LOL
i hope to have ch 14 in a workable format very soon but it is, of course subject to change least by the characters T/themselves!