Aloha and thank you for your time once more. As you noted I wrote this one with no dialogue. It was meant that way just to see how it turned out. I would like to use this as the bones for a fuller piece sometime as I feel the chracters could be expanded and the situation leaves itself open to be continued.

It wasn't my initial idea, I'll save that for another time but this story just came to me and so I let it run.

Once again thank you for your time.

As usual your humble servant Dog xx