The Orgainizational Series by Slave Ruthie

[slave ruthie]

thank you for your kind comments

[veru_skjava]

ruthie my sweet sis,

You take all the time you need sweetie, take care of yourself! The story is always there, waiting for your tender loving attention whenever you are able.

i love you dearest ruthie, talk to you soon. *kisses*

~t~
veru

[slave ruthie]

ohhh ty - remember my sis the stories nearly never made it except for YOUR help and guidance so that's another reason to love you even more (but that's impossible lol)

your Scottish imp-sis
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[slave ruthie]

i'm sorry for the long gaps before posting new parts of the Organization Series - i'm working on the Harvest of Tears again and Encounter With Destiny stories that sort of have to be finished concurrently.

one of the things i never envisaged was the way in which the characters and the plotline would need to be expanded, and i find as the mere writer it is sort of hard to keep up!

thank Y/you all the very kind P/people for the encouragement and simply bothering to read my efforts feedback means a lot, even the criticism because it helps a writer learn what works and what needs re-doen!

love & respect

ruthie[Phil]
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[slave ruthie]

i've just sent Jinn Sir the new chapter 12 - has it really been so long since chapter 11???

[Onid]

Just a post of appreciation - I thought it fitting that my first post be to the author of the earliest BDSM story I can remember reading.

After reading a number of stories over the years I thought it was time to contribute and write a review. Registration then led to browsing the forums, then Lo! and Behold! character names that actually sounded familiar?!

Now, I've only read the first story - house of Ali... by the previous posts it looks like I should read the next series... hehe.. I recalled that I couldn't even read the House of Ali in one sitting for sore eyes!

Thanks for the story!
I'm sure my LCD screen will help the second time round.

Appreciatively yours
Onid

[slave ruthie]

...for Your kind words! i hope You enjoy the other stories too

there's LOADS of brilliant stories by many authors on this site - i find inspiration from many sources and its really worth taking a look at as many as possible

soemtimes the theme's are abit weird for my taste but then again my stuff probably seems pretty odd to others LOL

love & respect

ruthie[Phil]
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[albear]

Everything's odd to someone

*pouncehuggles ruthie* I haven't seen you for ages!

[slave ruthie]

*climbs out from underneath albear, catching her breath LOL*

not seen you in ages either, girl!

hugggggggggggggggggggggggggggs



love & respect

ruthie[Phil]
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[slave ruthie]

hihi

just sent chapter 13 of EWD to Jinn Sir - i incorporated SOME of the suggestions readers very kindly offered (thank Y/you!!!) and i hope for more to help with chapter 14 that is definitely going to conclude this part of the Organization Series.

then i, umm i mean W/we (lol) can get HOFT moving again now W/we know more about little Alexa's true origins

[pejanon]

Great!

I though you - oops I mean Y/you "forgot" all about it

mmmm Alexa mmmm

Pejanon

[slave ruthie]

Great!

I though you - oops I mean Y/you "forgot" all about it

mmmm Alexa mmmm

Pejanon

lol - how could i forget about it? actually Phil takes little to do with the story these days apart from being terribly practical and saying things like "she must be double-jointed to do that" or "well, by the time they finished they'd be crippled" and other such comments...

...i haveto confess i got seriously stuck and couldn't see how the storyline might work. feedback (both good and bad) and suggestions have really made the difference. i also got into the trap of re-writing and re-re-re-re-re-writing until i couldn't see the story properly. i was told by another Author here to "let it go" and i did...and the sky didn't fall down LOL

i hope to have ch 14 in a workable format very soon but it is, of course subject to change least by the characters T/themselves!

[pejanon]

Hey, I used to write those never ending comics and I LOVED complicated plots and messed up charaters(those are the best lol) and after you just drafted half of it you come up with this great idea you want to string throught the main plot and then it's back to sketches and some more rewriting and ....gaaaah! Yep I know how it goes. Yep let it go (nothing will fall ) - the stories do not have to be joined perfectly.

mmmm

Oh yeah thanx for the nice scene offered in reply to my ahm review.

Have fun

Pej

... and then there is alexa ROFWL

[slave ruthie]

just finished re-drafting chapter 14 of EWD but i had to split it becasue its too long (sorry!) so i think this one's coming in at 15 chapters altogether.

thanks VERY much for the feedback and encouragement

[slave ruthie]

umm there's been a problem with the posting of the chapters and i've re-sent chapters 14 and 15 of Encounter With Destiny to Jinn Sir to sort this out - i'm very sorry and grateful also to the ppl who took their time to point out the inconsistent "jump" between parts of the plot

i hope it works out this time!

[slave ruthie]

thank You again, Jinn Sir, for Your patience and for fixing the end of Encounter With Destiny - You're the BESTEST!!!

[slave ruthie]

i'm working on Harvest of Tears (the 3rd part of the Alexa Trilogy) and i'm not sure if i've got things right with a major character. Rosario is a Domme and She is breaking a maid to become Her personal slave...but i have absolutely no idea what its like to dominate (except on the receiving end) and my Beloved Master says He can't help with how a Female Dominant might behave

so please, Ma'am or Mistress, if You are willing to read over a rough draft and advise this humble slave, please get intouch with me ruthiesb69@yahoo.com or with my Beloved Master philmackay@talk21.com

thank You

[slave ruthie]

i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice

Mistress Ranai has re-crafted Rosario into such a formidable, credible Domme that i would readily kneel before Her, if i wasn't already owned in real life LOL!

i wanted to record my gratitude, in particular to Mistress Ranai, and to all the O/other people who have taken the trouble to review and contact me with ideas and advice. Y/you have no idea how valuable this help can be to a novice writer!

please keep telling the A/authors on this site what Y/you like and dislike, what works and what needs to be changed. it's not about praise (although that's very nice to receive) but about learning and sharing O/our love of BDSM

[Nikita]

i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice

Nik the Writ Deejay is playing Sunshine of Your Love by Cream in the background....

Personally Ruthie, I give you a lot of credit for sticking with the chapter until you were satisfied with the result. Will you give us a heads up when you submit it for posting? I'll make time for it on my dance card.


And Mistress Ranai, I have another thing to thank you for. I'm sure it will not be the last time, either.

Nikita

[slave ruthie]

"Will you give us a heads up when you submit it for posting?"

i submitted it and a slightly amended chapter 6 today, nikita

[pejanon]

so now we have to wait?

aww grrrrr...
Ok some say patience is a virtue - and am neither



to you slave ruthie

(me wait....)


Pej

[slave ruthie]

so now we have to wait?

aww grrrrr...
Ok some say patience is a virtue - and am neither



to you slave ruthie

(me wait....)


Pej

if A/anyone wants an advanced copy as a .txt or .doc or .pdf, write to me at ruthiesb69@yahoo.com

[Ranai]

You’re welcome, it’s been great fun to be allowed to take a look and offer suggestions. Especially to an author who creates suspense and takes her readers through emotional turmoil like you do.

[slave ruthie]

dear Mistress Ranai

O/our chapter has been added but doesn't appear yet in the list of updates - its here at http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/c...hapterid=15894

i hope people like Rosario - i think She's wonderful!

[Nikita]

Dear Ruthie:

I have been remiss in not thanking you for an advance copy of your latest update. Rosario is indeed an addicting character, one that I hope you continue, even 'spin off.'

Looking forward to more of your stories and updates, Ruthie.

Music in background..."The Game of Love" by Michelle Branch

Can you hear it?

"Tell me...."

Nikita

[Ranai]

It’s nice to see the story’s continuation out in the open.

I think Rosario is now on my ‘Crime bosses I would like to have breakfast with’ list.

Thank you very much for sharing your talent with us all!

[Faibhar]

Given the obvious Veru_Skjava/slave ruthie mutual adoration etc., it should be duly noted that slave ruthie is indeed a fine author and contirbutor. Whatever her/he/it's future becomes it is well warranted by the fine writing and by V_S's unflagging support.

Faibhar

[slave ruthie]

Given the obvious Veru_Skjava/slave ruthie mutual adoration etc., it should be duly noted that slave ruthie is indeed a fine author and contirbutor. Whatever her/he/it's future becomes it is well warranted by the fine writing and by V_S's unflagging support.

Faibhar

Veru_Skjava and i are close friends who share a bond (pun intenteded!) of submission. she and i are linked through a wonderful Domme who guides us online

i'm such a fan of Your work, Faibhar, that Your calling me a fine author is to me great praise - thank You very much!

as to my future, it will remain as a "her" (checks her anatomy for signs of changes - nope, still the same bits as before lol)

i'm sorry for the long pauses between chapters but i've got myself abit stuck with Harvest of Tears - i have the ending, i ahve most of the build-up worked out (still getting research so if A/anyone reading this is a lawyer with experience of the criminal courts in New York State, pleeeeeeeeeeease would You help me sort out the procedure during Arraignments???), but there are soem inconsistent threads that i need to deal with and it either means re-writing earlier chapters or extending the planned length to make everything fit properly (sigh).

anyway, thank You Faibhar and any wise counsel would be much appreciated!

[Faibhar]

The pleasure is all mine, and of many others. Congratulations for your works and social contacts. Best of luck with all.

Faibhar

[slave ruthie]

abject apologies for the length of time between chapters but i ahve submitted HOFT8 for adding to the Library - if A/anyone wants an advanced copy please let me know