break me

This is not my first erotic poem, but it's my first BDSM poem; I really enjoyed writing it.


break me

blind me, bind me
sneak right up behind me
say you’ll never free me
let nobody see me

rape me, stake me
tie me up and break me
beat me up and rake me
rip me up and strip me

each time you defile me
oh, how happy I’ll be

Very nice.....thank you for posting it.

I liked it too.:cool:

man..put that to Michael Jackson's They don't really care about us and you've got a great parady song there...

i love poetry :) and i kinda liked it too :)

Heh, thanks.

That was really good arwcuw! i enjoyed it.

I think it's quite catchy.