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Birthday Treats
Author: J'hann
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(Added on Mar 17, 2003)
(This month 52563 readers) (Total 68642 readers) |
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A man decides to make his young partner's birthday a special occasion. His treat involves surprise, ravishment and forced exhibitionism. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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short sweet and to the point (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Mar 19, 2003 |
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I'm sure you will improve as you continue to write these stories. Just a tip. You need to experience what you write about. (7/10)
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