Euryleia's 2nd Level Three Assignment

[H Dean]

Try being overly obvious in a case like that...you could have said she tapped her cue on the toe of her name brand dyke boots.

I meant to add to this. There was a song called "Almost cut my hair", by David Crosby. He said something about letting his "freak flag fly" in the song. Everyone, at that time, knew what a freak flag was. It may be less so now. But little things like that can go a long way in a narration like your story.

Hasta for now.